In writing we are doing cartoons. We had to write a short story with 4 lines and then make a cartoon. This is my cartoon.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, July 26, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi taurae I like how you work hard on your cartoon 1 and
ReplyDeleteHi Taurae.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this cartoon. It made me laugh. I like that you have used simple pictures. It tells us a story without using text.
I know that you had to write 4 sentences and then make the cartoon to match.
You did a great job.Well done.Have you ever been stung by a bee before?