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Friday, August 23, 2019

Music story

This is a story I wrote after I watched the music  video So Good To Me. I chose this video because it is sad. I hope you enjoy my story.


It was an amazing sunny morning. The little girl was feeling happy and excited.


A little girl ran down stairs and run outside to see her pet but her pet was gone. She was sad. She was
worried about her pet. It might have been stolen. She was all alone. She looked at the rope. She went
in the forest to look for her pet. She grabbed a stick and kicked it. 


She went inside and drew a poster about her pet. She some posters on the trees. She knocked on
people’s doors and asked them if they had seen her pet. They told her “No.”


She looked around the playground. She saw her pet. She was happy and loveful.

They played hide and seek. The girl counted and the giraffe was hiding. He hid behind a tree.
The girl found him.

3 comments:

  1. Hello Taurae. I really like the picture you chose to go with your story. It makes me want to find out more about it. Well done.

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    1. Thank you Mr Martyn for your comment I really like it to. and I really want to do more.

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    2. Hello Taurae it is Santannah! I really love your work and I also like that you were using punctuation and subscribing word. Maybe next time you could write more. I like the picture because it look like that the giraffe have finally found you. I just wanna say a few question, why did you pick this song and are you the person or the giraffe? Bye Taurae!

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