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Friday, March 12, 2021

My Writing

 Kia ora people,

This week we have been learning about recount. A recount is a story and you have to use I because you are part of the story. We use past tense in a recount. Our lovely wonderful teacher showed us a story about the robbery animation so I have to be the one in the story. So here is my recount writing. I hope you like it.

Hope you have the greatest Weekend. Bye Bye

Thank you for reading my blog post.



 

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2 comments:

  1. Mrs CassidyMarch 16, 2021 at 7:25 PM

    Hello Taurae.
    I am looking forward to reading your recount once it's completed.You have started well and included some good describing words.I have seen the video and your writing matches.Well done.
    What do you think the robbers were going to spend the money on once they robbed the dairy?.

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  2. Mrs CassidyApril 6, 2021 at 2:44 PM

    Good afternoon Taurae.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.

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