Hello readers,
We have been focusing on descriptive writing. We watched a video and had to write descriptions for the characters. Here is my work. Hope you enjoy it! Please leave a comment.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello readers,
We have been focusing on descriptive writing. We watched a video and had to write descriptions for the characters. Here is my work. Hope you enjoy it! Please leave a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Thank you Taurae for sharing this post with us.
ReplyDeleteI am curious to find out how Rock died?.I thought with his strength and bravery he could fight.
What happened to him?.