3 Statements

 Hello readers today I just finish my persuasive writing and here is my press the links

I think… Dogs are better than cat 

Because… cats are crazy and Scaredycat 

My evidence: Dog can play with you want to play.

Source: link

I think… PS4 is better than a Xbox

Because… PS4 can have more game and you can watch whatever you want 

My evidence: The PS4 has 2000 game. 

Source: link

I think… Mint lollies should be at school 

Because… when you go swimming or morning tea you can eat a lollie and get energy 

My evidence: if you forgot to brash your teeth you can eat mint

Source: link

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Term 4 Swimming Week 2

 Hello today this is the last day of swimming

Something at I learn was kicking on my back.

My instructor is named Sue.

The thing that I like was swimming with a broad. 

My goals for the term is floating on my back.

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Term 4 Swimming - Day one

 Hello readers welcome back again  to my blog it is nice to talk again.

Today what I did was swimming at Canterbury swim school.

Something at I learn was kicking with a broad.

My instructor is named Sue.

The thing that I like was swimming with a broad. 

My goals for the term is floating on my front.

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Under The Sea

 Kia orana

welcome back to my blog for today

This term we have been learning to write narrative stories. The purpose of a narrative is to…  First we had to do a plan for our story.  

Then we had to write our narrative writing.

We had to include a Setting, 5 senses, Simile, Adjectives, Personification, Onomatopoeia.
One of my, favourite sentences is "I like having a shower. It feels nice and warm. I could have it all day."
One thing I could improve on is more language features

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