Hello today this is the last day of swimming
Something at I learn was kicking on my back.
My instructor is named Sue.
The thing that I like was swimming with a broad.
My goals for the term is floating on my back.
Please leave a comment.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello today this is the last day of swimming
Something at I learn was kicking on my back.
My instructor is named Sue.
The thing that I like was swimming with a broad.
My goals for the term is floating on my back.
Please leave a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hello Taurae,
ReplyDeleteThank you for saharing you#r work wit h us buye
Kia ora Mele,
DeletePlease check your comment. When you have finished writing a comment it is a great idea to read over it to check it makes sense before you publish it. Have a great weekend. See you on Monday.
Hello Taurae
ReplyDeleteI am just letting you know at I am looking at your blog
Hey Taurae, You have quite a short sentence in your blog. The second sentence does not make any seance. Please go back and edit that to make it more good. Have a great day.
ReplyDeleteKia orana Taurae,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your thoughts about swimming lessons with us. Did you achieve your goal? You may also want to check that your sentences make sense. It is a great idea to read over what you have written before you click publish.
Enjoy your weekend and I will see you on Monday.