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Friday, October 29, 2021

Term 4 Swimming Week 2

 Hello today this is the last day of swimming

Something at I learn was kicking on my back.

My instructor is named Sue.

The thing that I like was swimming with a broad. 

My goals for the term is floating on my back.

Please leave a comment.   


5 comments:

  1. Hello Taurae,
    Thank you for saharing you#r work wit h us buye

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    1. Kia ora Mele,
      Please check your comment. When you have finished writing a comment it is a great idea to read over it to check it makes sense before you publish it. Have a great weekend. See you on Monday.

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  2. Hello Taurae
    I am just letting you know at I am looking at your blog

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  3. Hey Taurae, You have quite a short sentence in your blog. The second sentence does not make any seance. Please go back and edit that to make it more good. Have a great day.

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  4. Kia orana Taurae,
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts about swimming lessons with us. Did you achieve your goal? You may also want to check that your sentences make sense. It is a great idea to read over what you have written before you click publish.
    Enjoy your weekend and I will see you on Monday.

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